Tikitty-Boo. . .
Things are going tikitty-boo. They are coming along. editing an audio book actually helps get every last mistake out of the manuscript. I took a break today and went to the Hood River Fall Festival. Things are almost done! I’m excited for this new series and I’m excited for the stories I want to tell in this series! I hope readers do enjoy the Jonas Johnson series. I think it’s going to be a hell of a ride! I would say it is a mix of science fiction and science fantasy. Anyway, look for the release of Message At The Deep in two weeks! I’m hoping the ebook and the audio book can be released on the same day but if not, the ebook will definitely be out on the week of October 22, 2025!
Message At The Deep (First Chapter)
ONE
The ravens chased away the sun. Seizing Dusk by its corners, they pulled it down and with cruel beaks pierced the night until they had put all the stars out.
He came to with an abrupt start; a nascent migraine was settling in his right temple again. He had nodded off, the only thing having saved him from falling into true sleep was the noise of the long-range lens of his old night vision scope banging against the dashboard. His eyes climbed up the dash to find an unusually large crow sitting on the hood of the vehicle. Was it a crow or was it a raven? He had a hard time telling the difference and he didn’t much care for either one.
The creature was Stygian black and it fixed its tiny eyes, glittering like wet onyx stones, upon him. He slowly reached for his thermos. The creature cocked its head to the side, tracking the movement of his hand. Slowly, Jonas unscrewed the top and took a sip of coffee, ignoring the crow. He kept his eye on the chosen location; the last door of the condo to the left of his windshield.
Still hot. No, it wouldn’t do, he thought. Not for the headache massing at his temple. The com-link in his coat pocket vibrated and chimed the distinctive tone he’d set for new clientele messages. Glancing at his face in the rear-view mirror, he winced as the com-plug in his ear burst with blue light in response.
He reached for the black canister under the seat beside him for the electrolyte mix. It was one of the rare things that worked to chase away migraines, if he caught it in time. He hated going to the doctor or using prescript drugs. It was a great difficulty to get an appointment as an independent patient, for the Health Authority wanted patients as monthly subscribers belonging to a health management company, not patients with their own coverage. Once a person was registered with an approved health management company (and therefore on the radar of the system) they interfered in every aspect of their life until that person died. Sometimes at their hands.
He gulped the cool liquid down, feeling the satisfaction of his thirst slaked, his cells replenished. Or at least he imagined this last part. He sighed in relief as the growing cluster in his head slowly subsided.
The monstrous ghoul, finding no reaction nor any food offerings from Jonas, hopped a few steps along the hood and then with a sharp flap of his wings, flew off. And with it, Jonas’s distracted mind. He shivered involuntarily, shook himself and willed his mind to focus again, the one thing Jonas prided himself on. Lately, he’d been losing sleep and losing his focus. It was an effort to do simple things now. Everything annoyed him and everything disturbed his sleep. And the nightmares were back.
One thing that he’d lost no sleep over was the fallout over the last case. Normally, a case ended with him finding a client’s cheating spouse, stolen goods, a runaway teen or some other minor resolution and him getting paid and going on his way.
This time it ended with the client’s own cheating husband murdering her for exposing his predilection for the very young, and Jonas hunting him down and killing him for murdering his client. He’d lost no sleep over that, which surprised him. What did cause him to lose sleep was that this man was a very wealthy, influential tech CEO who had friends and associates in high places with similar predilections. Sooner or later Jonas knew that he would be on the radar of some very dangerous people. Until then, he would continue as he was.
The two marks finally emerged from their poorly chosen love nest. A cheating wife and her paramour. When they walked out to the front porch of the condo, partially hidden by a few blood-good Japanese maples, Jonas lifted his night vision scope, adjusted the illuminator lens focus and took several shots. Then he recorded the two as they embraced and kissed, oblivious to the rest of the world. He felt grim satisfaction. That kiss would pay his living expenses for the next month. Often, he preferred boots-on-the-ground investigation over sitting on his computer using software to track and spy on people. A good, old-fashioned long focus-lens camera, a laser-gun in his holster and a stake-out vehicle was the perfect job for him. No computer consoles, no fancy tech like invisi-shields, which always had to be calibrated just right unless one enjoyed feeling nauseated. He smiled to himself. Sometimes he felt like a hypocrite. Spying on others was his job, yet he hated the pervasive spying of the government and its myriad satellite corporations. As a private investigator, once he got what he needed, enough was enough. They, on the other hand, could never get enough.
Pulling out his com-link device he sent a message to his current client that the marks had been observed, evidence taken and ready to be sent. Then he sent an invoice for payment. When he got home he would make the obligatory copies for a special file for himself. Insurance for lawsuits that he would keep for five years before getting rid of them. As he was sending the message the device pinged with a familiar sound. It was his druggist.
The new sleeping pills Ralston made for him were ready. Stronger, more potent. Able to block out dreams. Another hypocrisy. He didn’t like prescript drugs, but he was no longer opposed to illicit desiderata, if they were effective in helping him with his work or helping him get to sleep.
Ralston was a chemistry major and he was good at engineering imaginative drugs. Drugs that were of the purest, cleanest substances or drugs mixed in the right way to boost performance, drugs that could suppress hunger and help the mind do amazing things, if one didn’t over do it. There were times that Jonas could stay awake, alert and function at a high level for nearly a week, due to Ralston’s product. He preferred the term druggist rather than dealer when it came to Ralston.
Ralston also made all sorts of concoctions with mushrooms and mold. Jonas had started calling him The Alchemist. Ralston was something of a genius in his mind. Jonas would pick up his new batch later.
It was still twilight, the sun not yet seen but the midnight black sky had turned dark blue. A thin streak of pale rose color signaling the coming dawn shot across the horizon. He loved being planet-side and enjoyed any work he could get on Earth, just for the sunrises and sunsets. His soul hungered for it. Grrrrwhrrjuut. His stomach gurgled and growled for something else. It was time for some breakfast.
He glanced at the fingers on his right hand, making sure the fingerprint skinpad adhesive was still bonded to his actual fingers. He touched the ignition fingerprint scan and as the vehicle lept to life he turned up the heat, enjoying the warmth as it coursed through the seats and the steering gear. He spent much of his time feeling cold these days. Warmth was a luxury whenever he could get it.
“Manuel steering,” he commanded the General Use Program.
“Manual steering is less ideal for this make and model. You must opt in for this feature,” came the response. I have to opt in to steer the vehicle? This was different. Not a good difference. Jonas was insistent.
“Computer, I, Mr. Vaugn Johnson opt in to have the manual steering option on and available at all times whenever I rent a vehicle from Travel Sense Company. Please update the terms of service agreement I signed. Manuel steering, on.” Rotting hells.
“Manuel steering, on,” the computer responded. “Terms of service automatically updated, Mr. Johnson.” Suddenly, the holoscreen near the rear-view mirror exploded on. He jumped and grimaced in irritation as advertisements always came on far too loudly, as if to make some quick imprint on the captive mind before they got shut off. How many are they going to cram in this time? he wondered.
“Try our new and improved Wubbly Bubbly cleaner! Safe to use for laundry, household cleaning, disinfecting and even as shampoo! Now, with twenty percent more solution added! Say yes and the last four digits of your personal identification number to sign up for a free sample!”
“No.” Ad number one.
“Vera Cafe Mocha Mix! Mmm-mmm, delicious! Get that Vietnamese coffee experience for next to nothing! Say your personal identification number to get yours today!”
“No.” Ad number two.
“Are you lonely? Do you have strong manly. . .urges? Looking for beautiful females who will-” Jonas finally grabbed the bottom of the screening device and punched the “off” button. Unfortunately, this abrupt shutoff prompted the General Use Program to proceed along a more invasive path in its surveillance framework.
“Hello, Mr. Johnson. I’ve noticed that you’ve turned off the holo-screen advertisements. Are you in a regular habit of turning off this content?” This line of questioning in a rented vehicle was new to him. There must have been a recent system-wide network update among rental vehicle companies.
“Umm. . . .no?” he said uncertainly.
“We’ve noticed that you’ve turned advertisement content off. Such content supports the products, services and necessities that we all use for a better, more comfortable modern life. It also keeps many people gainfully employed which helps us all. Now, Mr. Johnson, how much web, holo-vid entertainment and news content do you watch on a daily basis?”
“Ah, well. . .” Jonas wasn’t ready for this question. Some system update must of happened since the last time he was on Earth. A nosier system update.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t understand your answer. You can say more than seventy hours per week or less than thirty-five hours per week. If less than thirty-five hours per week we can arrange to have a Robeson Entertainment tech visit and assess your dwelling for their latest entertainment packages?” Jonas rolled his eyes. Assess my dwelling. Sure.
Sometimes the true purpose of front-facing employees dealing with a customer base was spying on them for the company if said company deemed any activity or pattern of behavior suspicious. Jonas did not have an account with Robeson Entertainment.
“Never mind.”
“We have detected that you seem annoyed or disturbed about something, Mr. Johnson. Does-”
“I said never mind!” If it detected an angry expression that meant there was a camera hidden somewhere in the vehicle that needed shutting off or at least covering over. Jonas looked around in the more obvious places where he might find a camera. “Does a personal music collection or frequency or amplitude radio count for these packages?” he inquired.
“Radio is discouraged as it is antiquated and not curated by official government channels, authorities in your jurisdiction or solar system sector. From what location are you consuming unauthorized content, Mr. Johnson?” The General Use Program sounded alarmed, the pitch in its usually mellow voice noticeably lifted.
“Your anus,” he said dryly.
“Uranus. Does not compute. Let’s try again, Mr. Johnson-”
“No, let’s not! Rotting hells!” He moved to the side of the road and shut the vehicle off, then he fumbled around for one of his ad-and-voice command blocking drives and inserted it inside a drive dock hidden in a small panel under the steering wheel and started the vehicle up again. He wasn’t sure how long he’d be able to get away with doing this but it had always worked. His morning saved by an illegal ad-blocker, he breathed a heavy sigh of relief and continued on his way.
After charting a path to the diner Jonas took the scenic route; being the one that took him through the biggest parks and the oldest neighborhoods, the pinnacle in his mind being the beautiful, manicured grounds of Polaris Academy. Even in and around the well-kept college neighborhood before he got to the city he again noted the shattered glass of transit rail shelters here and there and hideous looking graffiti, sometimes with the prominent letters: LOC.
Some new gang in town? What does that mean? He wondered. Whoever the vandals were, they were relentless. They broke out glass or bombed out strong plasti-windows from transit shelters everywhere these days. And in every case there was the ugly, spray painted graffiti. Sometimes trash was strewn all over the shelter. It was becoming difficult for the city or corporate maintenance to respond to clean up calls. It chased more and more transit patrons away from public transportation unless they had no other way to travel.
Rounding toward the familiar area, he could see the long row of ancient oak trees that lined the street of the school’s eastern side. The actual school itself could barely be seen for the trees and the walls that surrounded it like an old fortress, a natural privacy barrier, but he liked catching glimpses just the same. It was early spring, which still felt and looked like winter. Across the street was an equally long line of cherry blossom trees, not yet in bloom. But there were a few daffodils here and there throughout the neighborhood yards announcing their sunny little faces, even in the twilight. His eyes peeled the streets from one side to the other, playing a childish mental game: how many daffodils do you see? His grandfather’s yard would explode with them every spring when he was a child. They were his favorite color back then, the color of happiness.
Unfortunately, just thinking of the bright color yellow seemed to bring a dull pounding sensation to his temple again. He rubbed it, trying to soothe himself. He looked over at the seat next to him, frantically grabbing for the drink canister. It was empty. He dug through his pockets, driving with one hand, switching to the other hand to dig in the pockets on the left side of his coat. So intent was he to find a pain pill to stave off the resurrected migraine that he swerved, nearly hitting an oncoming vehicle. The blaring horn of the other vehicle made him jump, lighting up his nervous system with painful pricks of sensation that spread throughout his body in waves. He grabbed the steering wheel with both arms as if it were a life raft. He saw a sharp flash of red, white and blue light in his rear-view mirror, and then the assertive alarm of a police drone. He had only seconds to pull over and stop. Failing to stop immediately would prompt them to shut off the vehicle remotely and if they deemed it necessary to do that, no matter what the issue was, he would face immediate arrest. Jonas, blocked by parked cars where he was on the street, simply stopped the vehicle, put it in park and kept his hands on the wheel. He turned over in his mind what would happen if they found he had several fake ID cards, what would happen if they found that he had no status assignation. His head was pounding but he was trapped. In the mirror he saw a large black drone dropping down right behind his vehicle, the emergency lights slicing through the morning. A large mech climbed out of the drone. Jonas touched his face, glancing at his reflection in the mirror. His old, plasti-flesh mask seemed to be holding up fine. But pounding heart and head made him second-guess this assumption. Jonas closed his eyes and went through the meditation chant he often went to when he was under great stress. It took him to a silent island of calm when his thoughts were stormy and chaotic. He wasn’t advanced in this technique. It only lasted for a few minutes but it was what he had.
A mech knocked on the driver’s side window. Jonas rolled it down.
“Good morning, mech-officer,” Jonas said calmly. He held the wheel tighter to stop his hands from trembling. Oh, dread god!
“Please turn your face to the left,” it said, the voice, grating and brusque as metal dragging across across granite.
He stilled himself, willing the steel of calm over his mind. He turned it head. The mech used a scanning tool attached to its arm to scan his face. Pain shot through his temple down to his eye. He wanted to cried out but remained silent.
“Is your name Vaughn Johnson?”
“Yes, mech-officer.” So far his ID passed but things could go south at any moment.
“You nearly crashed your vehicle into a parked pod while heading west on N. E. Knott Street.”
“Yes, mech-officer.”
“What was the reason that caused the near-accident?”
“I was trying to reach for my canister for something to drink,”
“What is in the canister, Mr. Johnson?”
“A hydration drink. I use it for headaches,” he said softly. His voice had grown softer as the mech’s voice had become louder. Jonas thought he might faint. The mech stared at him for a few moments as if one might stare at an insect before crushing it.
“Hand me the canister,” it said. Jonas handed the mech the canister and it used its arm to probe and scan the inside.
“No alcohol. I perceive that you are tired, Mr. Johnson.”
“Yes, mech-officer.” The mech suddenly grew quiet. Jonas hoped beyond hope that this interaction would stop. He didn’t want to answer anymore questions – no questions on his job or what he was even doing out so early in the morning. He had no set status on one of his ID cards, the real ID, the others indicated he posessed merchant status. This could be dangerous depending on the mech or officer and their motives. Everyone had a class status assigned at birth; labor, merchant, academic or the Enhanced (the wealthy). The dreaded one was free-born status. Which was actually no status. Independent. Freeborns sometimes disappeared in the system. There was no think-tank political organization or lobby machine for freeborns. But there was a growing, unspoken freeborn-to-serfdom-pipeline.
A wet warmth streamed down his mouth and chin. Jonas looked down. His nose was bleeding profusely.
“Your nose is bleeding. Do you need medical assistance?”
“No! No. . . I have migraines. I just need my medication,” he said hoping no more questions would be asked. Please, please, just go! God, universe, whoever, just let me get out of here! The mech stared at him so long it seemed his life passed before his eyes. This is what he got for trying to enjoy life, for taking the scenic route.
Just when he thought he was in true trouble the mech waved him on. It received a communication on its comlink device. It turned to look at Jonas, handing him back the canister. It’s dark cybernetic eyes oscillated between black and amber, flickering rapidly as it continued to scan him, the vehicle and the immediate area around him. Jonas forced himself to stare into those dark pools, steeling himself even more and recited the mantra silently to steady his mind and nervous system. At the same time he was quailing in fear on the inside. He felt he was on the verge of drowning.
“You may go with no fine this time, Mr. Johnson, as you have no record nor any prior accidents.” He felt relief wash down his spiked nervous system like a hard rain. He kept composed as his head exploded with pain and at the same time he wanted to shout for joy. He remained composed, wiping away the blood that ran down all over his coat. Not daring to move the vehicle until the mech got in the drone and lifted off, he pulled out a few napkins and wiped himself down and plugged his nose, holding his head back until the bleeding subsided. That took a huge cloud of tissues. After taking about five minutes to staunch the bleeding he fished in his pockets again for a stray pain pill. His eyes watered for the pain and stress. Finding one of the pain pills and holding it as if it were a found gold coin he swallowed it. He sat there looking out at the streets before him. It was still relatively quiet. He took a deep breath. His head was still pounding but the sharpness of the pain was now dulled. The ordeal over, Jonas started up the vehicle and continued on his way.
Twenty minutes later he’d arrived at The Gravy Train, his favorite breakfast spot. He quickly peeled off his plasti-flesh mask and rolled it up, stuffing it in his pocket. He stared at his face in the rear view mirror. Sometimes it took him a few seconds to get used to looking at his own face. A good plasti-flesh mask had many uses in his line of work. They also had limits. It couldn’t morph a person into something radically different from what they were but it could make one look like a would-be sibling or a cousin of the wearer. When they wore out and got too old they pilled and wrinkled in such a way that it became noticeable that one was wearing a mask. They also started to smell when they were too old. Even after washing them in disinfectant. It had to do with the senescent cells in the plasti-flesh mingling with human sweat, dead human cells and dirt for too long. Once it was too old it became harder and harder to get the smell out. He breathed a little better now. The mask tended to make the bridge of his nose a little more narrow. He was hoping this would help the headache.
- - -
He could smell the bacon and the coffee as he made his way inside. Several hoverboard riders raced by behind him, zigzagging across the street and down the block in tight formation. A recent law had made such antics illegal but Jonas usually enjoyed watching them just the same, with their boards lighting up the night and early morning with different colors. They were fun to watch but not today. He was hoping his headache would go away. They’d be chased down by drones and corralled soon enough by the police.
He looked for his favorite corner in the back of the place but upon coming inside, the diner was brimming with far more people than usual or was fire-code safe, to Jonas’s irritation. His head was still aching.
Lexia, the grand-daughter of the owners, who usually greeted him cheerily and immediately brought him coffee was distracted this morning. Her pretty face was furrowed in a frown as she took down the volley of orders coming at her on a large data-pad. It seemed that a boisterous, jovial tour group had come in for breakfast. Why they’d come here as supposed to some other place was a mystery as The Gravy Train was in a depressed area of the city and mainly served the humble, elderly patrons in the neighborhood. Jonas briefly flicked his eyes over the crowd, relieved that no one was sitting in his favorite spot. Mr. Galanis, the owner, gave him a slight wave. Jonas nodded. Mr. Galanis, looking harried, came over, bringing him a large cup of coffee.
“Thanks, Mr. Galanis. Is everything alright?” Jonas asked.
“Oh, no, no! No problem! These tour groups can be, ah, hectic,” he said, a light quaver in his voice. His hands were trembling slightly. He started massaging the muscles in his hands and then his temple again.
“I’ve never seen tour groups come in here,” Jonas said shortly. Mr. Galanis looked up at his wonderingly.
“Oh, we get them once in a blue moon. Anyway, I’ll get your order ready. Did you have a good morning?”
“I’ve made my money for the day. That’s always good. Can I get a seat, please? I’m a little tired.” mr. Galanis looked at him, frowning.
“Oh, yes, yes. I’m sorry! Here, your favorite seat, right here!” Mr. Galanis motioned over at his spot. Jonas went over to his favorite table and sat down.
Jonas had just got off a case, acquired a migraine he was trying to get rid of and almost got arrested. Nothing else was of particular concern to him at the moment but his own discomfort. The old man smiled briefly, nodded and left for the kitchen, getting caught up in the crowd as one of the men in the tour group pulled him aside. Jonas shook his head and fished for some creamer pods in the little basket on the table. He took out a small glass shaker filled with cloves from his coat pocket and dropped a few in his coffee then pulled out a small data-pad and pulled up a news feed to catch up with the news of the day then thought better of it. Screens only made headaches worse. He put it away. The dull thudding was starting to fade. Lexia had come and set a massive plate of cheesy grits, scrambled eggs and bacon on the table.
“I’m so sorry, Jonas! We’re swamped this morning!”
“No problem, Lexia. More business is always good,” he said, hoping she wasn’t in the mood for a conversation. She gave him a strained smile and whirled off quickly. Apparently, she wasn’t. Good, he thought. Before, he was in pain. Now, he was hungry. He wanted to chow down in peace. He wasn’t in the mood to chat this morning anymore. The mech incident had put him on edge.
He wondered, resting an annoyed gaze on the tour group. With the amount of food they were ordering the tour group seemed to like the food too, which further irritated him. He wondered why some people had to be obnoxious about the smallest of things. Like ordering food. He glared at the tourists, rolling his eyes. His stomach growled in protest. He wasn’t excited about new people telling all of their friends and crowding him out of his favorite restaurant. And the noise! He wished they would just shut up. Selfish? Yes. He was feeling selfish. And like with lots of other things in life, there wasn’t much he could do about it. But there was one thing he could do. Jonas dove into his breakfast.
Excuse The Mess!
I’m in the middle of a construction zone (hehe). The Mission series is up on the shop now. The Red World trilogy will be up some time in September. As the Jonas Johnson series is written and published you will find those in the shop as well. In 2026 I will have physical books available on the shop and later this year in the fall, I will also have audio books available.
Carta Fantastica
Here is the “first chapter” of my most recent short story, Carta Fantastica. My favorite thing about it is that - it has cats! If you want the entire story, subscribe to the mailing list!
Carta Fantastica
To my most Excellent Lord William Burley,
My crew has recently arrived into port. It is to you that I write this letter, as I can trust none of my fellows, the captains of the Capricorn Merchant Company, those fiends who conspired together and had my last ship, the Red Mermaid, burned down over these rogues bearing false witness of it carrying plague; a rotten chest of black humors and pox-infected rats, all of them!
My most merry and good-hearted friend, as I trust only you to relate to Her Most Uncanny and Beloved Majesty of this Blessed Realm my adventurous undertakings and the work I do for Herself, my latest mission has just ended, and with the greatest of success. I carry a thing that needs the greatest protection from thieves! Mine ears have heard dark things! That enemies wish to rob me of something precious! I know that you can help me with protection. Last night it was told to me that rogues had crawled aboard the Star Treader while I was away at an inn, looking for something peculiar. The crew was away, save for one, my trusty companion Archibald, who informed me that they did not take anything of value onboard as they seemed to be looking for a certain something in particular. I well know what it is they desire and who sent them. It would not be the first time I have discovered such scheming. Archibald once espied Lord Frost employing the services of the witch of Moonlit Barrow to put a curse on me! Intercede for me, please, to Herself* to have my fellows of the company protected, me and my crew and my goods, I beg of you. May a thousand and one good dreams come your way, for I am much obliged for your support at court of my explorations of shores known and unknown; of journeys not yet in our wake as there are more dangers unknown that must be conquered, described and explained in great detail for Her Majesty’s records and continued patronage, and also for your bestiary.
To my accomplishments I place great store by my own wit and bravery; and also of my crew of brave and valiant men, and the sharp mind of my intrepid Archibald, whom no explorer should do without, one of the grandest gifts I have received in my travails through the Land of Winter and he spoke most well of you over the matter of the commissioning of Her Majesty’s moonstone sceptre, made with the great moonstone gifted to me from the Winter King many months past, for my intrepid odyssey through his land, defeating the king’s enemies and slaying various monsters.
To give you a small account of my most recent voyage, once again we sailed the Sapphire Sea and went even further than we did before to meet with the Lord of the Sea of Darkness who dwells in the East. I made a wager with him and gambled with him and to win one of his fairy daughters for my bride. I, being of the finest blood of old, of the progenitors of the Mushki, was desirous of such an excellent wife and knew with the blessing of the gods that I had been chosen for this very thing! We chose the youngest as Archibald had judged that she was the fairest. Hers was hair thick, dark and subtle in its colours; in her strands shone the muted, changeable colours of the sea illuminated by lightening in a night storm, her wings multi-faceted and delicate as stained glass. I have sent her by escort to the castle gifted to me by our Good Queen Mab. It was when we were away from home one day that a different stripe of luck struck the Star Treader that we came to the greatest gift!
Taken from the Lord of the Deep himself, that great kraken of the Sapphire Sea, he roused himself from the depths and appeared before us. I kept my godly charm close to my bosom, clasped in hand, with prayer on lip and we prayed for Old Proteus to have mercy upon us and our voyage and he did indeed hear our cries and gave us great mercy by straightening out the sea and rousing the beast out of his watery and luxurious caves to go off hunting while we hid under the mighty shadow of the hand of Proteus. Archibald dove in first to acquire the rare and marvelous star pearls the kraken hides as carefully as a dragon hides his golden hoard. Others of my crew who are skilled at diving followed Archibald and up and down they all went, grabbing as many pearls as could be snatched and filling their bags with them. It was then that an ominous thunder-crack sounded over the sea as a warning that the kraken was on his return and I urged the men to stop diving for I surmised we’d collected enough pearls and urged them back into the ship! Too late did we take our leave, one of our men was swallowed alive by the kraken. A regrettable sacrifice. It thrashed and swelled up the waves something fierce, trying to take down my ship! We escaped by the luck of Old Proteus and now I have sent these exquisite star pearls on as a great gift to Herself. A handful of them are worth one palace! Do you not marvel at the lustre? How they shimmer gently in the sun with pale and varied colors, and gleam in the moonlight like diamonds that twinkle with the color of the stars? I write to you, most excellent friend, as I fear my rivals will once again try to destroy my good reputation amongst my peers in the company and at court and will try to destroy all that I have built!
Most Truly,
Captain Sadko
PS I have tried mightily to cast about for further explorations from my usual investors and have suddenly come upon some trouble getting support. May I never lose the patronage of Her Majesty, she who brings good dreams! If you please, lend a word on my good name in these matters! I would remind you of our friendship and that I need your help against my enemies, whom I feel are mounting some new mischief against me.
New Cover!
I always enjoy cover reveals. Maybe it’s an indie thing because I don’t see trad authors doing this so much. or perhaps I’m wrong, I don’t know. When I first started publishing, during the indie golden age, it was a popular thing to reveal a new cover. I still like it. I hope you do too. Below is the new cover for my upcoming novel, Message At The Deep.
The Perils of Publishing For Young Authors
Don’t be the entertainment!
If you haven’t heard about it yet, you will if you are in any way close to the online publishing world. A young author, Audra Winters, is being excoriated from one end of the internet street to the other for releasing a book without first having properly learned the craft of writing. I think what has made it so bad for her is that she is a whiz at marketing. So when it came to creating hype and excitement about her book she knew exactly what to do.
The problem is that for nearly all writers, their first few novels are unpublishable. They are bad books and there’s a reason for that - you must learn how to write and you don’t learn how to write well until you are through writing badly. That means lots of practice, usually many years of it, before you become proficient at it. This is true for any craft, art or discipline, any type of work that one wants to become good at. It takes lots of practice. It also means you must read and take in other stories and not just your own in the process of writing and finding inspiration. That was another problem with her. She was more concerned with her own world, art work and just about every other thing except her actual writing of the story. I don’t judge for it. When I was in elementary school I worked on a huge novel called Baby Adventures. I worked on this fantasy world of mine for years. But it was a childish project fit for a child. Not publication when I turned twenty. Advice for this author, adding more art work and creating a complex world are all great but you have nothing if you are trying to publish a book and the story isn’t readable. Many readers are asking for refunds. This is embarrassing I’m sure for her and a lesson for other young writers watching this unfold.
I have no wish to pile on the girl, only to note a warning to new authors and writers about the dangers of self publishing. Indie writers often extol the advantages of walking this path and I am no exception. When I started self publishing during the gold rush, back in 2011, I published a short story that got me excoriated all over Amazon. I learned quickly what to publish and what not to publish. But I had been writing for decades at that point so I had enough crafting skills to write a decent story. But, I still had much to learn about tropes and genre. What I learned from the short story affair was not that I couldn’t write, but that, that short story didn’t follow the tropes of horror. Normally, I don’t give in to such demands if I really believe in a particular story, but my heart wasn’t in horror and my writing, when it came to horror wasn’t going to satisfy horror readers. I had also written that story when I was a teenager. For a precocious teen it was decent. For an experienced writer, it wasn’t that good. I learned my lesson without too much damage having been done to my career.
The wonders of self publishing today is that there are no gatekeepers to prevent you from publishing your book and getting it out to readers. The problems with self publishing today is the same exact thing!
For young writers out there, don’t become discouraged by this tea cup controversy and hide way your work. Simply keep writing and working on your craft. A writer is a craftsman. Craftsmen must work diligently and for years before they are any good to sell to clients or work for money. Read good books (bad ones too for something can be learned from all stories) watch good films and shows (and bad ones too!) Keep working on your craft as if you were a guild member or a journeyman working under a master. The master? Your favorite writers that came before you. Study how your favorite writers write the books that you love to read and become inspired by that. Don’t hide away or become afraid over social media flaps. They come and they go. Do learn from them, though. Learn from the wisdom of writers who have been out there with success for years. They know a lot. You don’t have to take everything they say as gospel truth but there is always something to learn. Most of all, if you do seem to fail at a launch you can re-launch. Remember the idea of the magic bakery. Don’t know what that is? Go find out from Dean Wesley Smith.
Today, book publishing is in your hands and under your control. respect the craft and learn it first before the marketing, and in time you will do fine. And don’t ever be in a rush to publish!
Happy writing!
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Leaving Fans Hanging. . .
George R. R. Martin has not finished Winds of Winter. In fact, he has recently had a tantrum over fans of the series (myself included) holding his feet to the fire over making us wait so damned long for it. He deserves the excoriating he’s been getting. I can’t believe he’s been allowed to not finished this series by the publisher.
And this leads me to my point for this post - this is why I believe that writers need an outline, especially for long, complex works like ASOIAF. I can’t see how anyone can create and finish such a sprawling story without one. Martin’s refusal (or inability) to finish the series is a case in point. He used to make a big deal about being a gardener or a pantster (writing without an outline) rather than an architect or plotter. I am a plotter. Plotters can suffer from the same issues of losing interest but at the end of the day you can go back to your outline and see where things are not working or pick up the story and keep on writing. If you need to make changes you can make them rather easily because you can see the bones of the story, its structure, and keep the story on track to being finished without getting lost, frustrated and then giving up, which it seems Martin has.
What a disservice to readers who have been waiting for the next book for so many years!
Tale Foundry: A Whimsical Place!
One of my favorite places on YouTube is a channel called Tale Foundry. I get so much inspiration from this channel on creating themes for my own work. It’s a channel that makes you think deeply on story and the paths you can take, where you can go with any one type of story. It’s a fun channel and it focuses on themes in story and the question of “why” in story. Where John Truby focuses and teaches a writer on how to construct a story. if you are a writer I think it is very helpful but even if you aren’t I think you will find it very engaging and fascinating - if you love story.
Shakespeare After All
Another excellent instructor on Shakespeare’s work is Marjorie Garber. She is the author of the phenomenal book Shakespeare After All, a collection of essays on his plays. I have her book and have read it many times. It’s dog-eared now and perhaps I need to buy a new one but she also has a video course of her classes on the same subject on YouTube. I’ve watched them several times and I personally feel that between Garber and Cantor you will understand what you need to know about the greatest of all writers in the English language! (My opinion, of course!)
You can find her courses here. Enjoy!